During a holiday in Bordeaux, France, Carol, a young American woman with a failed marriage behind him, is first seduced and then kidnapped by a self-proclaimed vampire, André: remain a prisoner for two weeks (semi-consenting) in his castle. This time, the vampire makes his slave Carol, exercising sadistically at her all sorts of abuse and sexual perversion. After the end of the covenant, whereby after 14 days she would come back free, Andre keeps his word and Carol can return to Philadelphia home. But the girl continued her journey for the world and three weeks later, in Spain, he realizes she is pregnant. Deeply shocked and troubled by the doubt of having previously contracted the AIDS virus by her former husband and bisexual adulterer, Carol back to Andre, to persuade the sect of vampires that the baby is the precious fruit of the relationship between a mortal and a immortal.
The plot is promising, the cover is really well done and the first few pages are well written, finally, a vampire who is really a vampire, charm, fangs, blood and nightlife, and his companions promise immortality fantastic stories (maybe even a sequel) and the protagonist is quite melancholy, with enough intrigue and fascinate seems mentally.
Then he expires.
The story becomes incoherent and poorly written. The characters thin as tissue paper. Time does not know what it is, runs, no runs, fast, slow, without specific reasons.
What seemed to be a good story turns into a series of revenge and blackmail perpetrated without Motic (or at least the reasons explained by risulatre senseless so bad).
You return to the cliché of the evil vampire and sadist who kidnaps a beautiful little 'airhead, the violent until he falls in love with him and then wanders the world with her at home waiting for him polishing the coffin. A plot by
Armony second class.
it would have been fine if there was some small semblance of a story in the process of falling in love, but no, a page you hate each other but love each other like crazy, of course, can not be together for their own different and fears.
the end the author also adds a similar ritual based Eleusinian mysteries, mystical knowledge and spiritual quest, perhaps in an attempt to raise the standard of history, but the explanation is so patched and barbarous to throw further confusion on the reader.
short, a real disappointment.
Just one question: is there anyone who offers to rewrite this book to correct errors? (Because honestly the idea of \u200b\u200bthe plot itself, I liked a lot)
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